Dec 27, 2022
The whole last paragraph is a mess. Clearly it's not a better writer. And the one line paragraphs at the start drive me crazy. I hate that type of writing. So, no, not perfect.
Written by Susie Kearley 🐹 Guinea pig slave
Freelance journalist UK. Published in BBC Countryfile, The Mirror, Britain mag etc. Covers writing, health, psychology, memoir, current affairs, & environment.