Oh gosh, that is a different ending. Britain survives under Nazi rule, while the US gets Nuked. The story is well written and interesting. Could benefit from a proof read. You've got some missing apostrophes and things. I started leaving notes, and meant to make them private, but did it wrong, so the first two are comments. Sorry! Another two are private notes, with stars. I hope my feedback helps.

Susie Kearley 🐹 Guinea pig slave
Susie Kearley 🐹 Guinea pig slave

Written by Susie Kearley 🐹 Guinea pig slave

Freelance journalist UK. Published in BBC Countryfile, The Mirror, Britain mag etc. Covers writing, health, psychology, memoir, current affairs, & environment.

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