No, it was much more recent than that. Someone giving an equally valid example of what she thought something should say.

The phrase, "he was always fitter than me" was her issue. I have discussed whether either is fine with husband and decided against changing my copy.

Her version, which I did consider at the time of writing, seemed unduly wordy, in my opinion, and doesn't flow as well in the context it was written.

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