Nov 9, 2023
No, it was much more recent than that. Someone giving an equally valid example of what she thought something should say.
The phrase, "he was always fitter than me" was her issue. I have discussed whether either is fine with husband and decided against changing my copy.
Her version, which I did consider at the time of writing, seemed unduly wordy, in my opinion, and doesn't flow as well in the context it was written.